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My Dreamland, My Haven by ~stone-cold-heart:iconstone-cold-heart:



My perfect haven
Is not far from here.
A place where I shed,
Every last fear.

When stress and pain
Are all that I know,
To my secret place
Is where I will go.

You can not define
Where this place will be,
It’s just a place where,
Calm is given to me.

With music so soft,
Flowing Through my ears
I get rid of pain,
I cry all my tears.

It may be a shock
To find out the truth;
My haven is when
I’m a lonely lost youth.

I’m always hiding behind
This perfectly formed
Mask of deception
Mask of protection.

I love when I’m able
To hide and be me
I love it when
No one can see.

Lock up the door,
Let me be alone;
Let me cry out
And talk in this tone.

In a world full of roses,
That are merely just boys.
I hate it when they
Treat me like they do toys.

I wish for my world
I wish to just hide.
I wish for my world
Where no one has lied.

Please take me there,
Let me find peace.
Let me do my own thing
Let this reality cease.
©2007-2009 ~stone-cold-heart
:iconstone-cold-heart:

Author's Comments

entry for Geckomeravs competition, only I don't know how to link it 'cause I'm thick

All about where I'd prefer to be.

Anywhere but reality is my Lake Isle Of Innisfree - a poem about a haven. A home away from home as I see it.

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:iconstevie-poetryqueen:
this is pretttyyy cool ^_^ me likies

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Is anyone following this? Coz i feel like i'm wrestling a sackful of monkeys here...
:iconstone-cold-heart:
thanks it's a bit longer than previously expected... but oh well
:iconstevie-poetryqueen:
:)

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Is anyone following this? Coz i feel like i'm wrestling a sackful of monkeys here...
:icongeckomerav:
This rocks, and flows to smoothly, and I love the rhymes... It sounds really nice when read out loud.

Let me add you then.

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When there's no moon
I'm unrevealed
:iconstone-cold-heart:
thanks and sure thing =]
:iconpaddypaws:
I like your take on the subject, making it more of a mental state than a place as one might expect. Igenuitive ^_^ Nice pace and flow to it too =]
:iconstone-cold-heart:
my haven is my mind. I can go there whenever I need and please to... I don't see why it should have to be a place...

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